Will i ever get to wherever it is that i am going? If i do, will i know when im there? If the wind blew me in the right direction, would i even care?
Monday, May 18, 2009
we belong together...
"We belong together"
Part I - She leaves him gasping for breath....
Part II- Lost or found....?
One month later...
A sudden gust of breeze blew the windows of a sea facing apartment open, unveiling a freshly painted room with bare walls and unpacked boxes scattered all over the floor. Everything looked dark, silent and lifeless except the windows that rattled intermittently, as the mild drafts of wind blew against them.
Oblivious to her surroundings, she lay in one corner of the room in a state of delirium...
Pale and motionless...the lustre was gone.......
Her world was largely numb except for the distant sound of the windows and the unquenched thirst that she felt, as she wavered between various levels of consciousness…
Worn out by the immensity of her grief, she found solace in physical pain…most of which was gone now.....
As the frailty of her nerves and a lack of sensation consumed her...She slowly transcended to another world...another realm...leaving behind a trail of blood on the cold marbled floor....
Far far away from the cruel world and its complexities, in another dimension, she calmly drifted through a valley full of flowers,sheltered by a clear blue sky, towards a bright light that seemed to promise elusive happiness.She felt at peace at last, as she stood at the doorway of redemption...a place where tranquility and serenity reigned...harmony and ecstasy prevailed.
She smiled. She could finally be free now...from all the intricacies of her existence.
However, something seemed to be holding her back….She couldn't’t figure out who or why...
She dreamily whispered, “You don't understand…I’m happy here” but something kept pulling her away....
The light slowly disappeared as she struggled to free herself from the powerful siege she was engulfed in... "Let go of me.....I'm happy here...", She cried once again..But the light was gone. Everything slowly faded to black and white......
A loud scream brought her back to life....
Where was she? She wondered as she looked around puzzled by the sudden commotion around her, still in a semi-conscious state. Everything was dark and blurred, but she could hear some voices....mostly shrieks...Someone was holding her tightly, someone familiar......It was him.......
"What have you done.......!!", He cried, as he lifted her up and carried her down the stairs hurriedly. He looked miserable.
What had she done? She looked around confused and distracted by all the screaming.....Why was he so sad? She just couldn't understand...
With trembling hands she slowly touched his face...Why was he crying?
An excruciating pain shot down her spine and suddenly it all came back to her; All the hurt, all the pain and all the emptiness that she had felt, before she had decided to end it all..............
She had disappeared without a trace a month ago from his life and the lives of everyone she had known and loved... She had been unhappy for so long...She had to do this....this was the only way out- She had told herself....
A tear rolled down her cheek as she lay in his arms physically and emotionally spent...wondering whether she was lost or found...................................................
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(to be continued...)
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gosh...so perfect...perfectly normal of you to have written this...
wow. tht means i dnt have to pretend in front of u...i mean u already think im sum psycho dont you ?
:P
and a tear rolls down my cheek!
ahh sweet lord!! thats extremely well written!!!
p.s. m typing it the third time!!!!
ahh sweet lord! thats extremely well written!!!
@ Ad...
thnks for droppin by :) thrs more to come...n hopefully sumthin less soppy.
@ Pooja...
Thnks n I disabled the word identification thingy just for u :)
who is calling u a pyscho??? what i meant was that very few people could have actually portrayed this like you have.
An then Santa Clause came and gave her a better looking boyfriend, who knew how to wash clothes(almost). She applied dettol on her wounds and kicked out the old one outta the house. Ah! I should try romance writing sumtime.Oops I was supposed to talk abt you, bery well writen and moving, kindly add a murder or chase or a gun fight occasionally, I'll be eternally grateful.
nice nice me likes!! it reminded me of the scene in gladiator movie where the dying hero visualizes those beautiful fields with his dead wife and son....
the tragedy of our lives is that the questions facing us our so simple...yet our floundering minds add so much color around them...what will the world say, what are my obligations...blah blah blah...that we forget that in essence the question...is actually very simple and so is the answer
@ raj... =) for you
@ piyush... I was plannin to ask for a new car for christmas but a better lookin bf wudnt be a bad idea i guess :P bout the murder n gunfights...not happening man..its just a stupid soppy girly blog remember? :P
@ hemish... thnkyou :) n yeah i tried creatin the same black n white,slow motion kinda effect (wid my limited vocab n poor writin skills ofcourse) hope it worked :)
@ sanely insane... the questions r always simple but the answers r not...thnks for droppin by :)
PS- will complete the story soon ! I started off clueless, not knowing how to end it..but its pretty clear to me now..might take a while though...got thz few deadlines i hv to meet but i'll be back soon with an ending that fits :)
thnks everyone.
cheers :)
Wow! So intense...I am waiting for the next episode :)
@choco....thnks for droppin by come bck for more :)
hmm...hope the endin is happy atleast,,,
cool work!keep it up:)
@ sonal...
i hope so too
@ stuti...
thnks :)
oh please don't kill her!!!
@mom espace..
hmm...maybe i shud kill the guy as well then :P wt say ?
nah...u know wht they say..until its happy, its never the ending...umm yeah cheesy again..but thts how it is here *winks*
watch out for more. cheers.
well a great written story......
sumtyms myf play such a games dat we jst keep on guessing dat wad ws it???
our greatest win or our biggest defeat....
such r lyf diaries....
an awesum post again......
cheers
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