Why did you leave, Could have asked me. Ohh lord, I'm broke, An end is all I see.
"a love that could not be"
I guess if I keep following your posts, I can give likes of Kevin Brooks and Blake, a run for their money .. just don't know how I managed these lines, may be coz the adjectives and the connection with your post were deep enough to remind me, of what I never wish to be reminded of ! :(
i m so sorry, i dunno how to do the settings, but i am learning, please comment on few posts, and thanks for following by blog. i am not here to make followers but i am selective in my reading material as you will not see me in everyone's blog.
@ sonali... sweety u need to enable comments from the settings page :) n dnt worry it took me a long time to figure out the bloggin n posting thing my self :)
@ Ad.. like they say... ""It isn't enough for your heart to break because everybody's heart is broken now."" -Allen Ginsberg
@hemish...ur right.everyone does get heartbroken once...but i guess some people just never learn :P im one of them...still learning things i ought to know by now... :)
In case you have read Potter this poem suits the point when dumbledore dies... I know you wrote it with different sentiments in your grey cells. Nice work!!!
Wow I lub this one. I see this one is gonna be really popular. Lets contact Mills and Boon . They might publish it in one of their novels. I want three fourth of the proceeds. Its my idea after all.
mills and boons? call the times magazine or nominate me as the indian of the year or something... :P aww cmon now. just a couple of adjectives put together in some not so good times..uhh *blushes* thnks :)
Your poem talks about "love" and not about being "physical". Your poem talks about the emotions which a boy will feel when he realises he has not seen his mother till date, and no power existent on this earth can bring it back, or as any being lost a dear one... love in general is not specified; It is as general a term as specified are its effects.
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Fighting for that every breath of hope.
Kisses.
A dying hope, a fading light... wow. Well written. :)
we'll see once u r in bombay...bombay does a lot to a lot of ppl
:P
@ Luscious...... hmm thts precisely wht im doing...I guess we all are in our own wayz...
@ Ki... thnks so much :)
@ silly gilly...(i can call u tht on my own blog atleast if not urs ) :P
yeah we'll see *sigh* u wont take me seriously ever will u?
"a love that could not be"
Why did you leave,
Could have asked me.
Ohh lord, I'm broke,
An end is all I see.
"a love that could not be"
I guess if I keep following your posts, I can give likes of Kevin Brooks and Blake, a run for their money .. just don't know how I managed these lines, may be coz the adjectives and the connection with your post were deep enough to remind me, of what I never wish to be reminded of ! :(
Goes without saying, well worded .. !! :)
*Love and prayers*
awee...we wudnt want tht to happen now wud we :P
No. Never. Naah :D
thnks :)
scars and stitches
rues and cries
pain and hurt
regrets and sighs
i loooved da lines..... very close to my reality, loved da blog n its layout. I felt my blog is the best, but now i feel yours is better layout ;
will b back to read more.
@ sonal.
thnks for droppin by :)
will check out ur blog as well.
i m so sorry, i dunno how to do the settings, but i am learning, please comment on few posts, and thanks for following by blog.
i am not here to make followers but i am selective in my reading material as you will not see me in everyone's blog.
scars and stitches, rues and cries, pain and hurt, regrets and sighs!
FANTASTIC...
it sounds like me :)
@ sonali... sweety u need to enable comments from the settings page :) n dnt worry it took me a long time to figure out the bloggin n posting thing my self :)
@ Ad..
like they say...
""It isn't enough for your heart to break because everybody's heart is broken now.""
-Allen Ginsberg
thnks for reading :)
depressin stuff.. nicely written.. wow.. it almost seems to echo the feelings of most of the commenters here.
Guess everyone is liable to have their heart broken at least once.
very well written....
a lot of frustration and hopelessness there....
but the fading light may just be the last ray of hope.....b +ve...lol!!
@ vivek...the good news is tht the worse is over..n things can only get better from here.
thnks for droppin by :)
@hemish...ur right.everyone does get heartbroken once...but i guess some people just never learn :P
im one of them...still learning things i ought to know by now...
:)
In case you have read Potter this poem suits the point when dumbledore dies...
I know you wrote it with different sentiments in your grey cells. Nice work!!!
@ajay...u mean dumbledore n harry had a gay thing going ?! whoa !
:|
Wow I lub this one. I see this one is gonna be really popular. Lets contact Mills and Boon . They might publish it in one of their novels. I want three fourth of the proceeds. Its my idea after all.
mills and boons? call the times magazine or nominate me as the indian of the year or something... :P
aww cmon now. just a couple of adjectives put together in some not so good times..uhh
*blushes* thnks :)
Your poem talks about "love" and not about being "physical". Your poem talks about the emotions which a boy will feel when he realises he has not seen his mother till date, and no power existent on this earth can bring it back, or as any being lost a dear one...
love in general is not specified; It is as general a term as specified are its effects.
agreed to wt u jst said :)
ps- im a big potter fan too.
Uh Oh....Trouble in ivy land...
But so well written :)
@choco...
brkup here, brkup there,
trouble,trouble everywhr :)
thnks.
that was awesome its still a bond
I want a new post to comment on, it was written ages ago ... lol !!
I'll be more poetic next time in ur comment !! ;)
:P
@ tiger. ..thank you for dropping by :) and yes a bond is a bond...even when its broken.
@ sourav...wish granted..new post coming up in a few minutes :)
nice one...
wow this sound so like me at times ....but then life is hope and helps u clear it and see something nice :)
Love ur style :)
@ mysterious girl...
so many complimenst in one day..im alrdy on cloud9. keep reading :)
Boy!!!! I feel like u telling the story of my life!!!!
Nice work...
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wasted emotions. an emptiness. :) u r still d major heartbleed. :P
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